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This World Sucks. by ~brokenchick:iconbrokenchick:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Fixed


Go ahead and conceal the truth with lies
You can't hide what justifies
All your sins and hellish acts
But trust me when I tell you the facts
That the future looks bad and depends on today
And eventually for what you do you will pay
Because life is really beautiful and life is also pain
But you can only go so far until that special day
When you realize that everything's ended
And everyone you once offended
Never got to see the day where no one would say
Something unreal but now it seems okay
Because you have them blindfolded
with the "truth" of today.
©2005-2009 ~brokenchick
:iconbrokenchick:

Author's Comments

So purely out of boredom, I was watching the news and they're gonna starve this girl to death only because she is brain damaged. Now, I think this is wrong. Then I think of everyhting else that's wrong in this world:
Terrorism.
Rape.
Abuse.
Meat.
Bullies.
Poverty.
Starvation.
Kidnapping.
Homophobia.
The list goes on...so then I wrote this. 'Cause seriously, what is the world coming to? And I'd rather not get comments...it's my first poem so be nice...*puppy eyes*....

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~acdc4life13 Mar 18, 2005, 7:38:16 PM
HOLY SHIT this is fucking awesome i think ur a better writer than me i love tha message in this poem and u can rime and everything in this poem is true i cant rhyme but u can maybe u can teach me or ill learn on my wn this deserves a fav. :+fav:

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~Sublimikal Mar 18, 2005, 7:57:10 PM
shit is deep. loving it.
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~MorbidWhore Mar 18, 2005, 11:05:09 PM
hah! becky is a poet!!!! A poet I tell you! My wifey is a poet everyone! haha. i'm proud to have you as my wifey. good job becky. it's really...hmm..rhyming(i cant rhyme to save myself..wait i can! cat and um..hat! that rhymes!) and the best part is the message inside of the poem. yupp...meat eaters....grr...any who...GOOD JOB!!
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~maitejosune Mar 19, 2005, 3:43:34 PM
very good. each statement carries its own, powerful. i am very impressed. suggest you do more.
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~Metallica1232000 Mar 19, 2005, 8:27:46 PM
hey i like it becky really good

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~grimdeathallience Mar 24, 2005, 6:55:43 PM
interesting....................talk to NO more.................................... ........................................ ...................... dot d-o-t









d o t

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"denial is the first stage the rest are just useless"
-jay the great
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~lovesickpoet92 Apr 30, 2005, 11:33:44 AM
wow becky thats good (very deep)
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~Sublimikal May 3, 2005, 4:22:52 PM
goddamn, lookin' back at this poem it can make an incredible rap song. cant believe i didnt fav this before. shit, you amaze me with this writing!
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~brokenchick May 3, 2005, 5:16:45 PM
I was looking at my messages and I was wondering why you had put it under faves..well, thanks.
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